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"SOUL!" I yelled from the kitchen
"Shut up Maka, It's Sunday!" he grunted back, the sun's light filtered through the red curtains, bighting up the atmosphere.
I sighed angrily and took a bite out of my toast "It's Monday dumbass"
He growled from his room and I heard a thump, probably falling out of his bed again.
"BLACK STAR'S HERE TO BRIGHTEN UP YOUR DAY!!!!! HA, HA, HA, HA, HA, HA, HA!!!!" I heard that loud, annoying voice from outside.
"Be quiet Black*star, people are still sleeping probably!" Tsubaki gasped from outside desperately
"Right, whoops, well, I just made their day so much better, HA HA HA HA HA!!!"
Soul must of heard Black stars voice because he was already coming for the kitchen.
"Mornin'" Soul grunted, his blood red eyes glittering.
"Good Morning" I murmured again, peeling my eyes from his. It had been nearly a month after the attack from the Kishin, and since seeing Soul near death, my feelings for him suddenly seemed to explode outwards.
He ate in silence as per usual, and I walked over to the door to let Black star and Tsubaki in, Black star ran over to Soul while I hugged Tsubaki, one of my closest friends.
"Kid's not here yet with Liz and Patty?" I asked taking another bite.
"Oh, he was going to come, but suddenly though his painting was slightly tilting" Tsubaki giggled softly.
"Of course" I laughed with her "Well, hopefully he isn't late for class, he was last time and Stein nearly dissected him"
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"Hey Crona!" I yelled seeing him walk off near a tree. He jumped in surprise and looked over to me, relieved.
"O-oh, Hi Maka" He murmured blushing deeply.
"Haven't seen you in a while, how did the operation go?" I asked softly. He had a large wound down his torso, thanks to that witch and a bitch, Medusa.
"Fine, Stein said I can go back to school" He said cheerily. His gaze darkened slightly "Is Soul mad with me?"
What?
"Why would Soul be mad at you?" I whispered to him, confused.
"He's j-just glaring at us"
I whipped around and saw Soul quickly turn his head, his eyes dark and gloomy.
"Ignore him; he's just upset because he thought it was Sunday" I grumbled grabbing Crona by the hand and pulling him towards class.
"New outfit I see" I chuckled softly while we walked to class.
"Oh, Yeh, the other one was ripped from M-M...." He silenced off on Medusa's name.
"It's okay Crona, she won't be able to hurt you anymore, and we're here, all of us" I murmured grabbing Crona's hand.
Soul snorted behind me
"Piss of Soul" I growled walking slightly faster. Crona had a lime green hoddie on with white jeans
"Steins not in today, did you hear the news's as well about Miss. Marie?" Crona murmured when he took a seat beside me.
"No, I haven't heard anything about them at all"
"Miss. Marie and Professor Stein are getting married!" Crona squeaked happily.
"Really, Wow!" I gasped happily "Oh my god, that's amazing. When are they getting married?"
"I don't know, but Miss. Marie said something to me as well" He blushed "She said she wants to... she wanted to Adopt me"
I beamed up at Crona "Oh Crona, that amazing news. But, will you be okay with it?"
"Of course!" He quivered burying his face into a book, his eyes barely showing, but containing traces of fear.
"Marie and Stein will be good for you Crona, They won't hurt you, they'll love you like a real mother should"
"Really?" He whispered
"Of course" I giggled wrapping my arm around his torso.
He smiled happily
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"Why were you so cruel to Crona, Soul?" I snapped at him when we got back from school "He had amazing news, Miss. Marie and Professor Stein are getting married, and they're going to adopt him - then he thinks you're mad at him!"
"Whatever Maka, I'm not the one sucking up to him like a puppy!" He snapped back sitting down on the couch and flicking through channels.
I wanted to Maka chop him so bad, but I couldn't...
"What's your problem with him, he's so nice Soul, give him a chance!" I actually started pleading for Crona.
He switched off the T.V and walked just beside me.
"I was jealous alright, I was jealous of Crona and you" He murmured walking off to his room.
"What?" I whispered, my heart fluttering like a humming bird.
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bolkaleo Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Artist
Read all and I cried!!
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ShadowmoonXBlackfire Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
*pats head* Well, I hope you enjoyed them UvU
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lynne9123 Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i feel rght at home in this site you no why cuz theres soul x maka and maka x soul everywhere and i loved your comic!!!!
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ShadowmoonXBlackfire Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nyaha! ^^ Ehh~ I don't like Soul X Maka anymore~ I'm for a yaoi couple now with Soul~ XD and nya? What comic? O.O
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lynne9123 Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
-eye twitch- then why do you still have the thing on
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ShadowmoonXBlackfire Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nya~ What thing on?? XD The series? I've finished this series ages ago~
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lynne9123 Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
geez srry i just joined the site and i just noticed that now i guess im just a lil sad cuz my cat died today
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ShadowmoonXBlackfire Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nyaa~ It's alright ^^ <3 Aww! :( That's so sad </3
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lynne9123 Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeah i no so i joined the site and its making me a lil happy
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ShadowmoonXBlackfire Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, hey, at least the sites making you happy ^^ and even I have to admit, there is plenty of Soul X Maka to read everywhere XD (Even if I am a Soul X Kid fan~! :dummy:)
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blackwingingit Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:squee:soooooo cuuute!!!!!!!:squee:
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ShadowmoonXBlackfire Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you ^.^
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blackwingingit Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
u welcome! :D
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snowconerangel Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
WHERE ARE MY COOKIESSSSSSSSSS?!~ and lol :iconpervysoulplz: x :iconpervykidplz:





... :iconpervyblairplz:
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ShadowmoonXBlackfire Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
By god Woman, if those SoMa fans See SoKi be prepared for a shit storm xD even if it's the sexiest couple alive o3o and oh yeah *gives :cookie:*
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snowconerangel Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i knuuuuu~</i>

AND YAAAAAAAAY COOKIEEEEE :iconomnomnomplz:
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ShadowmoonXBlackfire Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
But I'll protect you o3o ~ *Guards you* STAY BACK EVIL SOMA FANS!~ :iconraegplz:
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snowconerangel Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:chainsaw:
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Just0looking0at0art Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012
I have to agree about the drawer part (sorry, but true) However, you have a gift of writing!!! It's simply amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ShadowmoonXBlackfire Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
what's the drawer part again sorry? o.o Oh, and why thank you >//w//< ~ :heart:
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Just0looking0at0art Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012
hahaha you said in the comment that you lacked drawing skills, so you write instead. (i am sorry if i come off cruel) anyway, i said "yeah you don't have amazing skills at drawing, but your writing is freaking fantastic!"
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ShadowmoonXBlackfire Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh yeah, I know I'm a shit drawer, so it's alright xD and thank you >w<
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diskidi Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
cute cute cute! i mean im a total kidxsoul fan u know tht but i thought this was a totally cute thing!
nd awwww soul! >w< no need to get jealouse ill always do wht u want tht is if i can see kiss kid and maybe more.....
Scuse me for a bit get a nosebleed to take care of.... :--)--
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Rayne63 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012
u have ur own views so anyone who says they don't like them is a hater
so yay, imaginary cookies for me :iconlalalaplz:
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ShadowmoonXBlackfire Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Oh yes, they have in interesting confession xD
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souleaterrockz Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011
Hell yeah I hope they will confess to eachother :D
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ShadowmoonXBlackfire Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
So u like my story? :D
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souleaterrockz Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011
Like it ? :O I LOVED IT !!! It was a great storie can't wait to read more I know it will be great:D
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ShadowmoonXBlackfire Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:D Awesome !!!! I guess i've got to keep going on then ^^ !!!
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souleaterrockz Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011
Yep that's for sure haha :D
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